Amalinders

Nice story, unique MC story baseline very good. Overall a well recommended book :)                                                                     

Two_World here. I will keep it brief:-Fast Paced-Unique enough concept, it will be revealed in 1st chapter-Family Building-Army Building-Sweet Love I ask you to give a chance to this novel and give suggestionsIf you have any questions, ask and I will answer them.

"We're NOT getting a divorce!" she shouted, remembering the promise they made the day on their marriage. Does he not love me anymore because of what happened in the past?

"No. If I have to sacrifice myself for our duty, I would. If we don't do this, Who will save them? Only us can do this. If I die in this mission, Please take care of my family. This is the key to my box. There are papers and letters there, please give them to my brothers and sisters. There is also one for you. I will leave everything to you . Okay? Remember, I love you. Don't worry! We'll still see each other at heaven. Okay?" That was the last message I heard from her.

And we could all use a little change

"Gene gear detected... would you like to generate a virtual replica?"

     He slowly reached into the sack by his waist and pulled out a pill and quickly popped it into his mouth. A cool sensation slowly spread in his body and his face calmed down.

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